Tuesday, July 24, 2007

An Ode to an ex

Your passion is lacking
your love it is tacky.
You kiss like I'm not there.
You talk of others in front of my face
and i took it without a care.

You said you didn't love me
my heart it did wonder
why you even tried.
Still i thought that i did
till you said i was a gid,
that you were pressured into it some how.

So i'll say this to you
in a sweet adieu
Your love it meant nothing at all.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

k doke.. you told me to leave my comment... so.. i am!!

I like this one better because it is better written, and it shows more emotion than the other one

or maybe.. im just crazy!!!

Anonymous said...

Angst.

Your punctuation os off, dear one, but I get what you mean.

-Emily